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"Your Whole Life is A Poem"

I want to be sorry,
But that was your fault.
It doesn’t matter.
You guys are
LIARS.
People leave!
Where the hell were you when I needed you?!
The windows are up – it’s not for you.
Every time you fail - every time it rains,
Should we start all over?
It only gets worse in winter.
And no matter how hard I try, you’re never satisfied.
I need to vanish.
There’s no one here.
Bye, I love you.

Oh, you foolish people!
“I’ll do things for you…”
Does that ring a bell?!
No.
I thought I had your love.
Tell me what happened!
What do you want?!
Isn’t there anything I can say to keep you?
There’s only us.
I’ll be yours-
Another promise passes by.
Fact or fiction?
Check out sad guys, you might see someone like you.
Never with enough satisfaction for me.
Good bye.

What is it?
It’s probably time to go back – too late!
Everything always stays the same.
Do you know what grim means?
It hurts when I really love, especially when love is lost.
I always tell you – take sides!
Do you think what you’re doing is right?
We all know why I’m going to fly by.
Do good for other people, but someone save me if you will.
Your whole life is a poem.
©2007-2009 ~PassTheTime
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Author's Comments

This was an English assignment where we had to go around and eavse drop on others conversations and write snippits down. Then we had to rearrange them in any order we wanted and make a poem with it. This is mine... it came out a little angsty but I like it.

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:iconedubz02:
wow what happened to you? lol jk. i feel this way a lot. great ideas and points you have here, and i like how it worked up to the dramatic, "your whole life..." great work!

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Haha! Acutally, this was a school asignment. We had to go around and basically eavse drop on people's conversations. Then, I just pieced the different snippits of conversation together and this is what I came up with!

Thanks so much! :hug:

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:icontalenthaven:
wow, wonderfully chosen order there :D

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Thanks so much!

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:iconalphakitty:
Wow. Cool assignment! You did really well. :)

I did something like that years ago, but it was with a page from the dictionary...
You know, open the dictionary to a randon page and jot down a few definitions. Rearrange them into a poem.

Heh. Mine didn't turn out nearly as good!

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Thank you!

Haha, yeah, that is fun :D.

Thanks again!

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:iconalphakitty:
:)

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:icondonvitocorlone:
Magnifique mais tellement triste.

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"Ne laisses jamais les autres te dire qui tu es." ça c'est de moi.
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Merci! :hug:

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